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October 26, 2009
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It took me two days to perfect this shot. The first attempt the day before, it came out blurry. Today it came out perfect, and the lighting was much improved.

Pets Park

Kenosha WI 2009
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Critique by *Strutty91 Dec 12, 2009, 9:56:33 PM
Seeing that it's taken you two days to perfect this shot, I can definitely see how this has taken several shots to find the medium. Starting from the higher background, the hue of the canopy is amazing. The sheer amount of colour is astounding. The colour of the sky contrasts with the yellow canopy and this creates a very effective purple outline. The amount of trees and foilage in the photo is perfect. Enough to let the sunlight & sky in, but not too little to leave the photo sparse. It drops away a little on the right side, seemingly a little less dense. Moving a little lower it's apparent that there is a significant change in foilage from yellow to green, but it's only a little so again it doesn't subtract from the quality. The photo was taken perfectly inline with the bridge, I can see you've spent time on ensuring this. You've taken this at the right time of day, enough light to detail everything but little enough to shadow. You've nailed it on the head when it comes to exposure and contrast, but I think it would benefit from a little lower in brightness. The bridge leading off into the distance pictures a sort of tunnel, leading off into a more alive world, where the green foilage is. But overall, amazing shot. A lot of detail on the bridge, perfectly reflected in the water, shadowing adds to the serenity of the picture, and an amazing use of contrast. Well done.
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~mr-sarcastic1984 Oct 31, 2009
thank you very much, i am glad you like it
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~escaped-emotions Oct 31, 2009  Professional Photographer
Stunning. Quite, quite stunning.
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~mr-sarcastic1984 Oct 31, 2009
thanks, im glad you like it too
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*nemeziz Oct 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
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Have a great weekend!
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~mr-sarcastic1984 Oct 31, 2009
oh wow thanks for the feature! :blush:
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*nemeziz Oct 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem at all:)
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*tiffawolf Oct 26, 2009
ur photos really inspire my work. im learning new idias each time u post a photo
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~mr-sarcastic1984 Oct 27, 2009
glad to see i inspire someone :)
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